tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6137038525559242213.post3397940693148565313..comments2024-03-17T03:19:28.232-04:00Comments on the Anonymati: First Pages: YA / Love & Steam & GasolineEditorial Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06294247222893767117noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6137038525559242213.post-82940862220154691642009-01-23T18:42:00.000-05:002009-01-23T18:42:00.000-05:00Thanks! Now I just have to get the rest up to snuf...Thanks! Now I just have to get the rest up to snuff.emeraldcitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11495241111424476230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6137038525559242213.post-78747368250339810972009-01-22T20:56:00.000-05:002009-01-22T20:56:00.000-05:00Yes, me too! Great title :).Yes, me too! Great title :).nonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00415222406280230021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6137038525559242213.post-66900842825129951362009-01-22T20:39:00.000-05:002009-01-22T20:39:00.000-05:00thanks!thanks!emeraldcitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11495241111424476230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6137038525559242213.post-36811821916833284042009-01-22T17:45:00.000-05:002009-01-22T17:45:00.000-05:00I love your title.I love your title.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6137038525559242213.post-45887360545168254432009-01-21T15:54:00.000-05:002009-01-21T15:54:00.000-05:00@Anon 1:Dystopian is a good choice. This is a stea...@Anon 1:<BR/><BR/>Dystopian is a good choice. This is a steampunk novel. It gets more steamy and punky on the second page *grin* with some clockwork automatons and a chase.emeraldcitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11495241111424476230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6137038525559242213.post-39191335622644829242009-01-21T15:21:00.000-05:002009-01-21T15:21:00.000-05:00Huh? My interpretation was that the pollution was ...Huh? My interpretation was that the pollution was so bad the snowflakes were turning black...further from the city (i.e. further from the factory pollution) then the whiter the snowflakes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6137038525559242213.post-15171194860569373362009-01-21T12:32:00.000-05:002009-01-21T12:32:00.000-05:00Since the snowflakes are black and the MC is worri...Since the snowflakes are black and the MC is worried about people starving, should this have the more descriptive category of "Fantasy" YA or "Dystopian" YA? It doesn't sound like generic contemporary "YA." (?)<BR/><BR/>I'm unsure if EA wants us to comment on the posts but but I LOVE the idea of a black snowflake. My mind sparked at that, a lot less so at the Aunt Millie stuff. <BR/><BR/>Good luck to you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6137038525559242213.post-38099541319355051222009-01-19T12:21:00.000-05:002009-01-19T12:21:00.000-05:00Thanks for the comments! I appreciate it! This pag...Thanks for the comments! I appreciate it! This page comes from a first draft, so it still has some ways to go. Thanks again. The comments are immensely useful for the rewrite.emeraldcitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11495241111424476230noreply@blogger.com